Ideas – I found myself having the second most idea comments from my peers Mason and Alyssa, as they were interest the most in the actual content of my paper, and the idea comments apply to that the most. I got multiple comments saying I did a good job introducing my ideas in my paper.
Evidence – I by far got the most evidence comments, as it was one of the stronger suits of my paper, and thus, one that my peers looked at the most. I was told I did a good job incorporating evidence and quotes to back up my ideas, and that it strongly benefited my paper in the grand scheme of understanding what I was trying to say.
Organization – I did not receive any comments on my organization. I am going to take that as my peers agreeing that I did a good job organizing my paper and therefore not needing any work in that section.
Local – I only got two local comments, one of which was formatting which I took into account, and the other was that my transition sentence could use work, as it was clunky and messy as of right now. These two comments are helpful, and with there only being two of them, I took that as my comment not having many small, grammatical errors that needed fixing.
